• The Mise-en-scene was good, people liked the clear car park representing isolation. Clothing was good and represented characters well. Character shouldnt have slowed down on the stairs.
• Camerawork was good with some nice shots - water droplets. Said to be a bit shaky at times, wasn't clear if it was intentional or not. Some more shots for the fight would have been good.
• Sound was good, matched well with the sequence but the music should have gotten quieter during the dialogue.
• Editing was good, some shots were too long. Fight scene well edited.

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